“ I think what you typed was very reasonable. But, what about this?
what if you were to create a killer headline? I ain't
suggesting your information is not good., but what if you added
a title that makes people want more? I mean Melissa
Gorga to Launch is kinda vanilla. You ought to
peek at Yahoo's home page and watch how they create news titles to grab
viewers to click. You might add a video or a picture or two to grab readers excited about everything've
got to say. In my opinion, it might bring your posts
a little bit more interesting. ”