“ I think what you wrote made a bunch of sense.
But, what about this? suppose you added a little
information? I ain't suggesting your content isn't good, but suppose you added a title to
possibly get people's attention? I mean The Best Vintage Clothing Stores is
kinda plain. You ought to glance at Yahoo's home page and watch
how they create news headlines to get viewers to click.
You might add a related video or a related pic or two to grab people interested about everything've
written. In my opinion, it could make your website a little livelier. ”