“ Everything typed was very reasonable. However, consider
this, suppose you were to create a awesome headline? I am not saying your content is not good., but
suppose you added a title to maybe grab people's attention? I
mean Liz McClarnon Swimwear Launch is kinda vanilla.
You ought to look at Yahoo's front page and see how they
create article titles to get people to click.
You might add a related video or a pic or two to get readers excited about
what you've written. Just my opinion, it might bring
your website a little bit more interesting. ”